[Iyrp-gcg] IYRP Global Taglnes and messages

Sat Jul 10 10:05:55 MST 2021

Dear Maryam,

You have done an excellent job tightening up these messages.
I only have one comment. Other than that this is fine with me.

Regards,
Mounir

From: Iyrp-gcg <iyrp-gcg-bounces at list.cals.arizona.edu> On Behalf Of Maryam Niamir-Fuller
Sent: Saturday, 10 July, 2021 4:16 PM
To: Jurgen Hoth <jurgenhoth1521 at gmail.com>
Cc: iyrp-gcg at list.cals.arizona.edu
Subject: Re: [Iyrp-gcg] IYRP Global Taglnes and messages

Dear GCG members : please take the time to review this english version attached here carefully. It will be the core of the messages we will send out in the social media campaign late August/September to governments and we need to make sure that there are no red flags that would turn them off.  Please be so kind as to say "OK" if you have no further comments - we want to hear from all of you. If you prefer to wait for the french and spanish translations then that is fine but just let us know.

Dear Jurgen

Thanks so much for all your great efforts at capturing everyone's comments and reconciling them in a few cases. I think we are getting very close to a good consensus.

In the attached, I have :

a) reduced some of the messages so as to be less than 280 characters, which sometimes required splitting a message into two,
b) made sure that some of the good buzz words offered by reviewers that also resonate in UNGA are in, such as 'future generations' , 'harmonious with nature', and giving more prominence to 'circular economy' which you had already included
c) bringing back one key message I had suggested before because it brings back issues that appear in the 12-monthly themes (over-exploitation of endangered species, wildlife trafficking, mining, etc.). These are also buzz words that resonate with CBD and UNGA.

Best regards

On Fri, Jul 9, 2021 at 4:04 PM Jurgen Hoth <jurgenhoth1521 at gmail.com<mailto:jurgenhoth1521 at gmail.com>> wrote:
Dear all.

Many thanks for your incoming comments and suggestions.

As per our discussion this morning at the IYRP Global Communications Team, I would like to share with you an overview of the ongoing review process related to the Taglines and messages:

  1.  We thought it would be convenient to extend the review period until next Wednesday, July 14.
  2.  Once we receive and integrate this third round of comments and feedback, we will seek to translate the new integrated version into the other official UN languages (Arabic, Chinese, French, Russian and Spanish). This shall allow you to share the Taglines with non-English speaking members of your regions to obtain further feedback so that we can ensure that we are truly reflecting a shared understanding of the key messages.
  3.  We will entirely rely upon your help to obtain, integrate and send us your regional feedback.
  4.  In steps 2 and 3, mentioned above, Maryam will make sure that the government of Mongolia is fully informed, and onboard, with this process and with the final text.
  5.  The latter will be used for all our promotional efforts directed towards the United Nations General Assembly.

Best,

Barry + Jürgen (Editorial team for the Messages and Taglines)

P.S. I am resending attached the current version under review as well as the spreadsheet featuring all feedback received in one matrix.

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Jürgen Hoth, Biol., UNAM; M.Sc., UoGuelph
Co-Chair for North America
UN International Year for Rangelands and Pastoralists
https://iyrp.info
(819) 421 4130
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Date: Thursday, July 8, 2021 at 5:10 AM
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Cc: Ann Waters-Bayer <waters-bayer at web.de<mailto:waters-bayer at web.de>>, Maryam Niamir-Fuller <mniafull2 at gmail.com<mailto:mniafull2 at gmail.com>>, Hutchinson, Barbara S - (bhutchin) <BarbaraH at cals.arizona.edu<mailto:BarbaraH at cals.arizona.edu>>, "Engin Yılmaz (Yolda Initiative)" <engin at bican.net<mailto:engin at bican.net>>, Hutchinson, Barbara S - (bhutchin) <BarbaraH at cals.arizona.edu<mailto:BarbaraH at cals.arizona.edu>>, Barry Irving <birving at ualberta.ca<mailto:birving at ualberta.ca>>
Subject: Re: IYRP Global Taglnes and messages
Dear all,
Many thanks for your responses. Please find attached the WORD document with the Messages and taglines that Barry and I integrated based upon the feedback received.
I also attached the spreadsheet with all the feedback received from each source and their respective comments. There, the boxes filled in bright Green are the statements that are found in the WORD document. For your feedback, please use only the WORD document–if possible with track changes. Thank you.
Our overarching editorial direction was to try to ensure that the statements were general enough to provide inclusion for as much of the global group as possible without diluting the content.

Please, do not hesitate to forward to whoever I may have missed. Thank you.

Best,
Jürgen

____________________________
Jürgen Hoth, Biol., UNAM; M.Sc., UoGuelph
Co-Chair for North America
UN International Year for Rangelands and Pastoralists
https://iyrp.info
(819) 421 4130
145 York Street Apt 1001
Ottawa, ON, CANADA, K1N 8Y3
jurgenhoth1521 at gmail.com<mailto:jurgenhoth1521 at gmail.com>
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Date: Friday, July 2, 2021 at 10:24 PM
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Subject: Re: IYRP Global Taglnes and messages
Dear all,

So far we have received three valuable feedbacks.  Many thanks.

Please be reminded that if you have not yet sent yours, the deadline is next Monday COB (5pm NY time), so that Barry and I can integrate the information received.  We look forward, in ideally, to send you all a prefinal version perhaps that same day and then we would have until Thursday the 8th for fine-tuning among us.  This timing shall allow us to submit the final version to the Global Communications Team (Barbara, Ann and Engin) by Friday the 9th.  Many thanks.

Please take some time to look into the list of people to whom I am sending out this email, above and if I missed someone please just forward it to that person. Thank you.

Best,

Jürgen

P.S. To facilitate your access to it, I am herewith resending the same document I sent you before for review.

On Mon, Jun 28, 2021 at 2:47 PM Jurgen Hoth <jurgenhoth1521 at gmail.com<mailto:jurgenhoth1521 at gmail.com>> wrote:
Dear colleagues and friends, regional IYRP chairs and co-chairs,

As we approach UNGA we are preparing the branding guidelines for our IYRP with key global Taglines and Messages that seek to capture the common denominators for all of our regions.

Please find herewith attached the latest draft document (a page and a half) with the text aptly led by Engin Yilmaz. As per the Global RISG meeting held last Friday, I was appointed as chief editor for reaching a document that we can all comfortably use in our international communications.

I would therefore much appreciate if you would please review the attached document (with track changes, please) so that we can reach –in its essence– five or six key messages that could represent us all.

So here are the boundaries of our playing field:
1. The five taglines and messages already represent key essential elements, your refinement will be much welcomed;
2. Please don’t hesitate to send us one more Tagline & message in case you think it is utterly essential for your region; and
3. Please keep in mind that the total number of characters is 280 (equivalent to three lines).

The deadline for submitting your input is next Monday, July 5th, this shall give us time to edit, send you back an integrated version for your final feedback to be ready by Friday, July 9th.

Please send directly to me your responses/suggestions/edits. Many thanks.

Best,

Jürgen

____________________________
Jürgen Hoth, Biol., UNAM; M.Sc., UoGuelph
Co-Chair for North America
UN International Year for Rangelands and Pastoralists
https://iyrp.info<https://iyrp.info/>
(819) 421 4130
145 York Street Apt 1001
Ottawa, ON, CANADA, K1N 8Y3
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