<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><div class="">Dear Ann,</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">It is a very good paper already, thanks a lot. I've added a few suggestions (to make it easier, I placed them within the text) and comments too. And I agree with Maryam with the length of the text and the abstract part. Just that perhaps it may be better to have the abstract as in bullet point format (5-6 most significant messages of the text). Something like:</div><div class=""><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">•<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre;"> </span>Pastoralists are among family farmers as features of pastoralism fully reflect the definition and spirit of family farming used by the World Coordinating Committee for the IYFF and for the Decade of Family Farming. </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">•<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre;"> </span>Pastoralism, as other family farmers, plays a crucial role for wellbeing of people and environment by its contributions to reducing hunger and poverty, providing food security and nutrition, improving livelihoods, managing natural resources, protecting the environment and achieving sustainable development. </div><div class=""><br class=""></div></div><div class="">All the best,</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Engin</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><br class=""><div class="">
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